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{►||General}

 

Name: Eclipsestar
Past Names: Andy, Eclipsepaw, Eclipsefur, Eclipsestar
Nicknames: Eclipse
Age: 31 moons

 Lives: 8/9
1. Saving Festerstar from a fox

                          {►||Clan Information}



Current Clan : Grassclan
Current Rank Leader
Past Clan(s): - N/A
Past Rank(s):  Rouge

Mentor:
                 Past: Frogwhisker
                 Current: N/A
Apprentice:
                Past: N/A
                Current:Vixenpaw 

 

 

                          {►||Identification}

 

Breed: Main coon/American longhair/Bobtail
Fur: Soft medium length
Build: Large, Lean, Muscular
Key Features: 
Amazing markings on his pelt, neither his parents were black, so he was the odd kit in the litter.

Scent: 
Oak tree

 

                          {►||Relationship Information}

Sexuality: Bie curious
Looking for:

Lasting relationship
--
EXPIERENCED

(now if you want a M rp with him, I'll put your cat down as crush or friend. We need to rp more to be more in relationship.)


                          {►||Personality}




++Positive++
Kind
Loving
Bold

--Negative--
Very grumpy in the morning. He's mad at cats who talk to him constantly in the morning
||Neutral||
Impatient

 

 

                          {►||History}
Kit~

As a kit, Eclipsestar was born a rouge. His father, was men and grumpy, and would beat his mother for no reason and rape her constantly. He always heard her cries of pain, and sometimes pleasure.
A week after he was born, Eclipsestar  saw that his mother, Moon, had giver birth to three other kits. And he found out that he had an older brother.
Exlipsestat always played with his siblings, and liked to lay in a cardboard box with warm and soft pillows in it.
But the happiness was to fall once more ally cats came....they ruled the place, and always went to go see the new borns to see if they will be pleasurable to the streets.
When he saw the leaders eyes flash from him, to his brown and orange family he knew the cats were all confused.
'Do they think I'm a loner kit?' he thought. His pelt was dirty since he never let his parents wash him, and he smelled from always being in the very dirty card board box.
The two beside the leader came near him, and one swatted him across the face. Andy(Eclipsestar) cried in pain. The toms touched him, and he just noticed all his ribs were showing, and how weak he was.
The largest tom picked him up, and he could hear his mother cry out. As the toms took him away for killing he felt the black tom cat let go of him with a screech. He turned to see his father holding the cats tail, his eyes flaring.
His father was somewhat the deputy so he had reasons to be mad.
Andy's brother came and scooped him up, and all his siblings and him went under a dumpster, and they all watched in terror as their parents were killed right in front of them. His mother landed in front of them, and stomach and neck ripped open and her blood and organs fell out. She whispered "r-r-r-u--n.." before her eyes turned white and she fell limp. Their brother acting quick grabbed them all, The two youngest in his mouth, and Andy and his 2 day old brother on his back.
Zane (oldest brother carrying them) ran towards the fence. Any turned and saw at least 7 cats pelting after them. Zane jumped, and whipped his back up causing Andy and Tom to go over the fence. Zane dropped the two other across, and he said "RUN! Into the forest! Don't look back" As he finished, 4 cats grabbed Zane, and ripped his throat to shreds.
Tom, being the eldest picked up the two youngest(Alissa and Sydney) and all 4 of them ran into the dark forest, the rest of the 7 cats racing after them.
The kits dove into a hole in a tree, and stayed there cuddled up quiet as a mouse as they heard the cats rush by.
The next morning, Andy and Tom awoke to the sounds of screaming. Alissa and Sydney were gone!
The two cats peaked out of the holes and saw their sisters lifeless bodies laying in front of them....Alissa's head was snapped off, and lay against a rock.
Andy cried, but something stopped as his tail was pulled out from under him and he was smacked against a tree.
He was knocked out, and all he could see and hear was his brothers cries of pain....then andy opened his eyes to a battle cry, and saw 7 strong and huge cats  jump onto the rouges. HE saw one come near him, and he stuck out his tiny claws, though he was to weak and hurt to fight. The cat flicked its head and a pretty she-cat came and took him away "Its ok little one. Your safe now" he passed out, when they went towards the mountains..

Apprentice-
It had been quite a few moons, when the attack and death of his family had happened. He had been rescued by cats of Grassclan, and nursed back to health. He was shocked to find that they had to cut off his tail, since it was causing problems for him but he liked the feeling of the way it was and how he walked.
After a few moons of getting used to living near the mountains, it was time for his apprentice ceremony.
"from this day before you earn your full warrior name, you will be known as 'Eclipsepaw' may Frogwhisker train you well" he earned the leader say, and he touched noses to his new mentor.
he stood proud as the clan chanted his name. 'Eclipsepaw!'
The next day, he was awoken by his den mates, Bunnypaw, Rockpaw, and Swiftpaw. They were saying that all four of them will be going on patrol this morning. After a while of him complaining 'It's to early!' they finally got him out of the den and his warm comfortable nest, and into the forest.
After a few moons, he had successfully learned how to hunt, stalk, and fight. he was the strongest and fastest apprentice in the den.
His foster mother, Mousetail, was always proud of him, and greeted him when he came back from patrol.
Later, he had started growing a relationship with Bunnypaw, but noticed Rockpaw and Swiftpaw getting angry to. Well no doubt, cause she was the most gorgeous cat in the clan.
Many moons passed, and Eclipsepaw got much bigger, lean, and muscular. He was the biggest apprentice in the clan.

Warrior-
A moon later, I was time that the apprentices got their warrior names.
Rockpaw wa snow 'Rockyfur' Swiftpaw was now 'Swiftwing' and Bunnypaw was now 'Bunnypelt'
Finally when it was his turn, Mousetail, Frogwhisker, and Bunnypelt looked at him with love and appreciation in their eyes as the leader announced that he was not to be called 'Eclipsefur' the clan shouted his name....well besidesRocyfur, and Swiftwing who just sat there glaring at him as he cuddled against the happy Bunnypelt.(Rocytail is her brother and he doesn't like rouges, so he doesn't want his sister to be with Eclipsefur who he still considered a 'rouge')
Two moons later, Eclipsefur and Bunnypelt were now in a wonderful loving relationship, and one night the two snuck out and went into the forest to do....business all night long.
When rockytail and Swiftwind found out, the two were furious and they brought Bunnypelt into the forest and raped her. Eclipsefur grew protective of his mate, and gave the two warriors some scars.
One night he noticed that Rockytail, Swiftwind, and...Bunnypelt were all not in their nest!
Eclipsefur, being one of the best trackers ran out into the forest and found them. He was shocked to see Rockytails lifeless body and Swiftwind raping Bunnypelt. Rockytail must of realized that what he was doing, was wrong and that he and Swiftwinf thought for Bunnypelt. Rockytail had lost..
Eclipsefur let out a battle cry and jumped onto  Swiftwind, and bit down on his neck and quickly ripped out his windpipe. Eclipsefur turned and saw Bunnypelt next to her brother...she was beat up and bleeding hard onto the floor.He ran to her side only to find her eyes dull, and body cold and lifeless.
Eclipsefur cried and cried for hours until help came and took them back to camp...not Swiftwind since the birds had already began eating him.

Deputy-
Rockytail was in fact the deputy, and the clan gathered around the high rock, awaiting who would be the next deputy.
Eclipsefur's ears buzzed as he herd his name among the clearing. All eyes were on him, as he walked forward to touch noses with the leader. His eyes widened as the clan called his name, and he felt all of Starclan enter him.
He was now the deputy of Grassclan. A moon or two later, a horrid disease spread over the clans which killed all the elders and a few kits. Then the medicine cat called him into Ebonystars den, and he found her in terrible shape. You could see her ribs and her fur was matted with mud, her eyes were dull with sleep all around them. Ebonystars voice was raspy and cold; she said that the disease had already then at least four or five of her lives, and will take the rest soon. A tear went down his face as her beating slowed. "I know you'll make a great leader..." Her voice trailed off, her eyes closed and her breathing stopped and soon she went limp.
Eclipsefur jumped on top of the high rock and announced that the leader was dead and that he will be your new leader.

Leader-
Eclipsefur went to the moon pool that night with the medicine cat, and earned his nine lives and anew name Eclipsestar. He came back tot e clan, announcing the new deputy, Thistlestripe and other news. It was all a cat could wish for. He had a mate who was soon to be expecting his kits, an apprentice and the hole clan loved him. They didn't hate him like he worried. 
Eclipsestar knew that he would face many challenges a long the way, but for now he wanted to enjoy his clan and life of being leader.

                          {►||Family}

Mother: Star
Father: Boulder
Siblings:  Zane, Tom, Alissa, Sydney
Mate: 
Past mates: Bunnypelt
Current mate: Antbite,   fester...
Kits: coming soon

 

 

                          {►||Extra}



Theme song(s): 
Radioactive
Likes:
Walks, Kits, SEX, looking around the clan, pretty she-cats, kits


Dislikes: 
Fires, dogs, buzzards/crows

 

 

                          {►||Relationships}

 

Bullet; White ll No opinion / neutural
Bullet; WhiteBullet; White ll Acquaintance 
:
Bullet; Green ll Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; Green ll Good Friend
Bullet; GreenBullet; GreenBullet; Green ll Best Friend

Bullet; Blue ll Ex-Crush
Bullet; BlueBullet; Blue ll Pity For
Bullet; BlueBullet; BlueBullet; Blue ll Ex-Mate

Bullet; Purple ll Distant relative
Bullet; PurpleBullet; Purple ll Relative
Bullet; PurpleBullet; PurpleBullet; Purple ll Close Relative

Bullet; Pink ll Small Crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink ll Average Crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; PinkBullet; Pink ll Major Crush

Bullet; Yellow ll Suspicious
Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow ll Questionable
Bullet; YellowBullet; YellowBullet; Yellow ll Interested in / Curious about

Bullet; Red ll Lust
Bullet; RedBullet; Red ll Love


Bullet; Orange ll Respect
Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange ll Fear
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange ll Terrified of

Bullet; Black ll Slight Hatred
:bulletblack::bulletblack:|| Despises

Bullet; BlackBullet; Black:bulletblack: ll Wants Dead / loath

Star! ll Family by choice
:star::star: || Mentor/Apprentice

Heart|| Mate
Black Rose || Dead

                      |Name | Clan | Gender | Bullets | Thoughts|
Grassclan
Antbite| :bulletpink::bulletpink: :bulletred::bulletred: :bulletgreen::bulletgreen: :heart:| my beautiful mate...I love her so much, and she's expecting kits!
Thistlestripe| :bulletorange: :bulletgreen::bulletgreen:| he's my medicine cat. Very good and strong cat that I know will serve the clan well.
Vixenpaw| :star::star: :bulletgreen:| my first apprentice! She is a strong cat, and will be a good and noble warrior one day
--
Darkclan
Festerstar| :bulletpink::bulletpink: :bulletgreen::bulletgreen::bulletgreen: :bulletred::bulletred:| we sat and did much more than talk :eyes:...now she's expecting kits from that annoying Adderstripe. Festerstar is saying she wants me to have a few of her kits. She is....the most nice cat ever. She understands me and we've been friends for moons!
Autumnfall| :bulletgreen: :bulletblue: ll quiet....she's not my type anymore though..
Duskpaw| :bulletblue::bulletblue: :bulletwhite: :bulletblack:| What a stupid apprentice 
--
Breezeclan
--
Fireclan 
Spiritstarl :bulletblack::bulletblack::bulletblack: :bulletblack::bulletblack:|| This bitch! I want her DEAD!! Luckily I took one of her lives....
--
Rainclan
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                          {►||Roleplay Example}


                          {►||Roleplay Information}

 

✔   Notes | Prefer

Skype | Don't have one

✔   Chats | Sure

X Comments | No

 

X G/PG | no! So boring

✔PG-13 | Yes

✔ Mature | call me a freak but...this is my best

✔ Crack | Lol what?

FallenMountainClans

 

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m-aster-miller's avatar
Can you add Raindapple to the relationships please? :D